This is the pond, and these are my feet.
This is the rooster, and this is more of my feet.
Mamá was never good at pictures.
This is a statue of a famous general who lost an arm,
And this is me with my head cut off.
A poem about moments that bring meaning to our lives
Learning Objective: to write an original poem using “Ode to Family Photographs” as a model
Ode to Family Photographs
This is the pond, and these are my feet.
This is the rooster, and this is more of my feet.
Mamá was never good at pictures.
This is a statue of a famous general who lost an arm,
And this is me with my head cut off.
This is a trash can chained to a gate,
This is my father with his eyes half-closed.
This is a photograph of my sister
And a giraffe looking over her shoulder.
This is our car’s front bumper.
This is a bird with a pretzel in its beak.
This is my brother Pedro standing on one leg on a rock,
With a smear of chocolate on his face.
Mamá sneezed when she looked
Behind the camera: the snapshots are blurry,
The angles dizzy as a spin on a merry-go-round.
But we had fun when Mamá picked up the camera.
How can I tell?
Each of us laughing hard.
Can you see? I have candy in my mouth.
“Ode to Family Photographs” from NEIGHBORHOOD ODES by Gary Soto. Text copyright ©1992 by Gary Soto. Used by permission of HarperCollins Publishers. All rights reserved.
Writing Prompt
Choose several photographs of places and events from your life that you remember fondly, or think about what “photos” you have in your mind of such places and events. Using “Ode to Family Photographs” as a model, write a poem based on the photos or mental images you choose.
This poem was originally published in the September 2021 issue.
Essential questions: How are our identities shaped? What is the role of family in our lives? How do we remember the past?
1. PREPARING TO READ (10 MINUTES)
2. READING AND ANALYZING THE POEM (30 MINUTES)
3. WRITING (30 MINUTES)