A boy raises one arm and recoils as shadowy figures with sharp grins surround him under a full moon
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Dead Ringer

Can Meredith escape the zombie horde—or will she become a part of it?

By Lauren Magaziner
From the October 2026 Issue

Learning Objective: Students will analyze the mood in a work of flash fiction.

Lexile: 660L

Standards

SPOTLIGHT ON: MOOD

Mood is the feeling you get from reading a story. Writers create mood through word choice, imagery, dialogue, and setting.

Meredith skipped down the bus aisle, unable to contain her excitement about that evening’s field trip to Hollowbrook Farm. She paused in front of her twin sister and her friends, even though she knew she shouldn’t.

At the start of seventh grade, her sister had asked for space. “I love you, Mer. But it’s healthy for me to have my own friends,” Clara had said. “I want to be seen as myself—not part of a matching set.”

Then Clara had pressed half of a “Best Friends” heart necklace into Meredith’s hands. Meredith had wanted to cry as she ran her fingers along the jagged edge. Her heart had been broken, like the necklace.

“Can I sit with you?” Meredith now asked, ignoring Clara’s blistering glare.

“Mer,” Clara mumbled. “We agreed you’d let me do my own thing at school.”

“We’re not at school,” Meredith replied. “Please don’t make me sit alone on the bus.”

Clara scooched over to let Meredith take the inside seat. But as the bus started rolling, Clara turned her back to Meredith, leaning into the aisle to chat with her new pal Zoe. Meredith curled her knees to her chest. She might as well be sitting alone.

“Corn maze or haunted house first?” Zoe asked.

“Haunted house,” Clara replied, just as Meredith chimed in with “corn maze.”

They’d always been opposites, but to Meredith it was in a French fries-and-ice cream kind of way: good on their own, better together. Clara clearly felt differently.

Bitterness rose in Meredith’s throat as she looked out the window at the fields rolling by. “I wish Clara and I weren’t so different,” she whispered, grasping the half-a-heart charm. “I wish everybody was the same so no one had to feel bad about themselves!”

The metal burned between her fingers, and lightning streaked across the sky in the exact shape as the cut of her necklace. Meredith’s heart hammered. But when she blinked, there was no storm. She must have imagined it. . . .

The second Meredith’s feet hit the ground, she could tell something was wrong. Combing through the crowd, she realized her classmates looked exactly the same. Clara, Zoe, everyone. Dead ringers. Their faces were smoothed over, blurry, as if someone had violently scrubbed each person’s identifying features out with an eraser. And they all wore Clara’s sweater and jeans.

Forty heads swiveled in her direction. Eighty zombie eyes blinked simultaneously. A shiver jumped down Meredith’s spine.

“Hello, Meredith,” they moaned in unison, their lips peeling into tortured smiles. Their too-red mouths were open wounds. 

Their grins were as sharp and curved as sickles.

Her wish had come true, and it was truly monstrous.


“When everyone’s the same
same same,

We live a life of joy.


And in this little game
game game,

You are our perfect toy.

For if you try to run run run,

We’ll force you to conform.


And we will have such fun
fun fun,

When you are in our swarm.”

“But I don’t want to be in your swarm!” Meredith shouted.

“You wanted us alike,” the voices hummed, like a colony of bees. “Now we are, and you will be too!” 

Run! Meredith thought as the clones closed in. She sprinted into the swaying stalks of the corn maze, whipping around turn after turn as the clones clawed at her.

Tears blurred her vision. “Help!” she shrieked, but the stalks were so thick no one could hear her scream.

“Join us!” her classmates growled.

Meredith’s lungs and legs ached. A jack-o’-lantern illuminated the monster leading the horde—and a glint of gold around its neck. One half of a “Best Friends” necklace.

“Don’t fight it, Mer,” the zombie groaned. “You and me, all of us the same. Isn’t this what you wanted?”

It was exactly what she’d wished for, but not like this. Meredith finally understood what Clara meant about feeling like a matching set.

Meredith clutched her necklace and closed her eyes. “I wish everyone was back to normal.”

But it didn’t work. She crouched lower as the zombies lurched forward, arms outstretched. Corn stalks rustled. 

Meredith gasped. She’d made the wish with half the heart, wanting to be part of a whole. Now she needed the opposite.

Meredith stopped running and the Clara-monster—all claws and snarls—collided into her. She yanked Clara’s necklace off and paired it with her own, completing the heart. “I don’t want us to be the same!”

The necklace burned her skin. Lightning floodlit the sky. Then silence. Meredith was alone.

When she finally emerged from the corn maze, her classmates were in line for the haunted house. Meredith caught Clara’s eye, and her sister beckoned. “Join us?”

Earlier Meredith would’ve died for this invitation, but now she understood: They didn’t have to do everything together to stay close. She could do her own thing too. 

Meredith waved her sister on, then approached the teacher chaperones. “Coach Johnson? I’d like to join the track-and-field team.” Meredith beamed. “Turns out I’m an excellent runner.”

Writing Prompt

Write a super-short story that creates a clear mood using the same writing devices you noticed in this story. Choose one setting to build your mood.

This article was originally published in the October 2026 issue.

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