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The End of Jimmy Valentine

Can this notorious bank robber change his ways?

By Mack Lewis

Learning Objective: to demonstrate analysis of characters and their decisions by writing a scene in which the main characters reflect on the decisions they make in the play

Other Key Skills: text structure, inference, figurative language, character, author’s craft
AS YOU READ

Think about the choices Jimmy and Detective Price make.

Scene 1 

A Missouri prison, 1902

N1: Inmates wearing striped jumpsuits are hunched over tables, stitching shoes. The room vibrates with the sound of whirring sewing machines.

N2: A tough-looking guard walks in, followed by the even tougher-looking warden.

Guard: Prisoner number 9762!

N3: A man near the back stands up.

Jimmy: If you mean Mr. Jimmy Valentine, well, then, that’d be me.

Guard: The warden would like to speak to you.

N1: Jimmy saunters over. The guard rolls his eyes.

Jimmy: So what can I do for you, sirs?

Warden: I don’t know how you managed it, Jimmy.

Jimmy (innocently): Managed what?

Warden: You’ve been pardoned by the governor.

Jimmy: It’s about time. Been here 10 months.

Warden: Your sentence was four years.

N2: Jimmy shrugs.

Warden: This is your chance, Jimmy. You’re not a bad fellow at heart. Stop cracking safes and live a better life.

Jimmy: Me? Why, I never cracked a safe in all my life!

Warden: So how about that Springfield job, then?

Jimmy: Why, I never was in Springfield in all my life!

Warden: Better think over my advice, Jimmy.

Scene 2  

An inn near the Missouri-Kansas border

N3: Innkeeper Mike Dolan looks up from sweeping the floor to see a familiar face.

Mike: JIMMY!

N1: The men share a hearty handshake.

Mike: Sorry we couldn’t get ya out sooner. Folks was squawkin’ so loud down in Springfield, the gov’n’r needed extra persuadin’.

Jimmy: Well, I’m free now. Got my key?

Mike ( handing Jimmy a key): You betcha.

N2: Jimmy goes upstairs. He slides back a panel in the wall, drags out a suitcase, and unlocks it.

N3: He gazes fondly at the safecracking tools inside and runs his fingers over them.

Jimmy: Oh, how I’ve missed you, my precious friends.

N1: He carries the suitcase downstairs, where he takes a rose from a vase of flowers and pins it to his lapel.

Mike (seeing the rose): Another job already?

Jimmy: What’s your meaning? As far as anyone knows, I’m a salesman for the Boston Biscuit Company.

Mike (laughing ): Sure ya are, Jimmy. Sure ya are.

Scene 3

Detective Price’s office, St. Louis, Missouri

N2: Neat stacks of paper cover a large desk.

N3: Behind the desk, Detective Ben Price leans back in his chair.

N1: His eyes search the ceiling as though the solution to his current case might be found there.

N2: Lieutenant Porter knocks lightly on the open door.

Porter: Sorry to interrupt you, sir, but—you know Jimmy Valentine got himself another pardon?

Price: So I heard.

Porter: Well, there’s been a bunch of bank jobs since he got out. Eight hundred bucks stolen from a safe in Richmond, $1,500 gone from a safe in Logansport—

Price: That’s small change for Jimmy.

Porter: Yes, sir. But last night, $5,000 was stolen from a bank in Jefferson City.

Price: Guess we’d better get down there.

Scene 4

Jefferson City Bank, Jefferson City, Missouri

N3: Detective Price examines the vault.

Price: This has Jimmy’s autograph, all right. Look at that combination dial—jerked out as easy as a radish in wet weather. Jimmy’s got the only tools that can do it.

Porter: People will rest easy knowin’ you’re on the case.

Price: I caught ’im once, I’ll catch ’im again. And no clemency foolishness this time ’round. Jimmy will be lookin’ at life through steel bars for a long, long time.

Illustration by Carolyn Ridsdale

Scene 5

Elmore, Arkansas

N1: It’s a sunny afternoon in Elmore.

N2: Horse-drawn carriages clatter down Main Street.

N3: A sharply dressed Jimmy steps out of a carriage. He strolls down the street, pausing in front of Elmore Bank.

N1: Farther on, he catches the eye of a young woman walking toward him.

Jimmy: Good after . . . um, after . . . uh.

N2: A smile tugs at the woman’s lips.

Annabel: Good afternoon, you mean?

Jimmy: Yes, good afternoon, miss.

Annabel: Good afternoon to you too, sir.

N3: Annabel waits for Jimmy to reply, but he just stands there in a daze.

Annabel: Well, um . . . goodbye, then.

N1: She continues on, but Jimmy stays frozen in place.

Boy (snickering ): Bffff!

N2: Jimmy turns to see a boy sitting on the sidewalk.

Jimmy: Hey, kid—who is that young lady?

Boy: Annabel Adams. Her pa owns the bank.

Jimmy: Is that so? Is Miss Adams . . . married?

Boy: Nah.

Jimmy: Oh!

Boy: But she has loads of suitors.

Jimmy: Oh.

Scene 6

A hotel in Elmore

N3: Jimmy walks into the lobby of a charming hotel.

Jimmy: I’d like a room, please. The name’s Spencer. Ralph D. Spencer.

Clerk: What brings you to Elmore, Mr. Spencer?

Jimmy: I’m looking to go into business, maybe open a shoe store.

Clerk: You’d do pretty well. There isn’t a shoe store in all of Elmore. It’s a pleasant place to live too.

Jimmy: I’ll stay a bit, look things over.

Clerk: Here, let me get your suitcase.

Jimmy: Thanks, but I’ll carry it myself.

N1: Jimmy picks up his suitcase, his safecracking tools rattling inside.

N2: Jimmy remembers the rose on his lapel. He takes it off.

Jimmy: Would you be so kind as to dispose of this?

Clerk: Sure.

N3: And with that, Ralph Spencer, the phoenix that arose from Jimmy Valentine’s ashes—the ashes left by the flame of a sudden attack of love—goes up to his room.

Scene 7

Spencer’s Shoes, Elmore, one year later

N1: Spencer’s Shoes is crowded with shoppers.

N2: Jimmy helps an elderly customer.

Jimmy: How do those boots feel, Mrs. Tatum?

Mrs. Tatum: They are just right, just right! Please wrap them up, dear.

N3: She glances around the busy store.

Mrs. Tatum: You know we just adore you here.

Jimmy: Thank you, Mrs. Tatum. And you know I couldn’t be happier in Elmore myself.

Mrs. Tatum: So the big day is right around the corner, eh?

Jimmy: That’s right—just two weeks.

Mrs. Tatum: Annabel will make a lovely bride—and you a handsome groom!

N1: Later, Jimmy sits down at his desk to write a letter.

Jimmy (writing ): Dear Mike, Please meet me in Little Rock so that I may give you my tools. I’m making an honest living now. I’m marrying the finest woman on Earth. The straight life is the only life for me. She believes in me, old pal. I wouldn’t do another crooked thing for the whole world . . .

Illustration by Carolyn Ridsdale

Scene 8

Spivey’s Drugstore, Elmore, the next day

N2: Detective Price pretends to look at a display of soaps and razors.

N3: Really, though, he is looking across the street into the window of Spencer’s Shoes.

Price (to the shopkeeper): Who’s that man fitting shoes?

Shopkeeper: That’s Mr. Spencer. He is a fine man and will set you up with a fine pair of shoes.

Price: Is that so?

Shopkeeper: Oh yes. We’re all very fond of Ralph. Whole town’s goin’ to his wedding.

Price: Who is the lucky bride?

Shopkeeper: Annabel Adams, the banker’s daughter.

Price: You don’t say.

Shopkeeper: From the moment she saw him, she never had eyes for another. Same goes for him. He loves that young lady something fierce.

Price (to himself  ): The banker’s daughter? Sounds like Jimmy is back in business.

Scene 9

Elmore Bank

N1: Annabel and Jimmy walk into Elmore Bank.

Mr. Adams: Annabel! Ralph! Come see my new vault!

N2: Gathered around Mr. Adams are Annabel’s sister, Matilda; Matilda’s husband, John; and their two young daughters.

John: Ain’t that vault a beauty!

Agatha: It’s so shiny!

May: What a funny clock it has.

Mr. Adams: That’s the time lock. And look here: It fastens with three solid-steel bolts thrown by a single twist of the handle. What do you think, Ralph?

Jimmy: Very impressive, Mr. Adams.

Annabel: Now, Papa, Ralph must be off to Little Rock to buy his wedding suit. Here, Ralph.

N3: Annabel picks up Jimmy’s suitcase.

Annabel: My goodness! Is your suitcase full of gold bricks or something?

Jimmy: It’s . . . uh . . . full of some things I don’t need for my shop. I’m going to return them in Little Rock.

Mr. Adams: Now put that suitcase down. I’m sure my future son-in-law can take one more minute to admire this feat of engineering!

N1: As the group chats, no one notices Detective Price leaning against a counter on the other side of the bank, watching them intently.

N2: Suddenly, there’s a scream.

May (woefully): We were just playing!

John: What happened, May?

May: Agatha . . . she’s . . . she’s inside the vault!

Mr. Adams: The lock hasn’t been set. The vault can’t be opened!

Matilda: What do you mean?

N3: John tugs at the handle.

John (yelling ): Agatha!

N1: They all hear Agatha shrieking from inside.

Matilda: Open the door! Oh, break it open! My darling Agatha!

Mr. Adams: There isn’t anyone in Elmore who can open it. What shall we do? She’ll run out of air!

N2: Annabel turns to Jimmy, her eyes full of tears.

Annabel: Isn’t there anything you can do, Ralph?

N3: Jimmy is about to reply when he looks across the room and locks eyes with Detective Price. He turns back to Annabel and gives her a bittersweet smile.

Jimmy: Annabel, give me that rose you’re wearing.

N1: Jimmy stuffs the rose into his vest pocket.

N2: Whistling softly to himself, Jimmy opens his suitcase and takes out his shiny instruments.

N3: The others watch him as if under a spell. Across the room, Detective Price watches too.

N1: Jimmy’s drill cuts into the steel.

N2: Ten minutes later, he throws back the bolts and opens the door.

N3: Agatha bursts out and into her mother’s arms.

Matilda: Oh, Agatha!

Agatha: Mother!

Jimmy (to himself ): Ten minutes—that’s a record.

N1: Jimmy walks straight to Detective Price.

Jimmy: Hello, Ben. Found me at last, eh? Well, let’s go. I don’t know that it makes much difference now.

N2: Detective Price gives Jimmy a long look.

Price: Guess you’re mistaken, Mr. Spencer. Don’t believe I recognize you.

N3: And with that, Detective Ben Price leaves and strolls off down the street.

 

What to Know: Meet the Author

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This play is based on a short story by a writer named O. Henry (1862–1910). And like his character Jimmy Valentine, he led a life full of twists and turns.

O. Henry, whose real name was William Sydney Porter, grew up in North Carolina. Before he was a full-time author, his jobs included rancher, pharmacist, and bank teller. During his time as a bank teller, he got into some trouble: He was sent to prison for embezzlement, which is a kind of stealing.

In prison, he began writing short stories under the pen name
“O. Henry.” Shortly after he was released, he moved to New York City and became a successful author. Today, he is known for stories about everyday people that feature humor, irony, and surprise endings.

Writing Prompt

Write a scene that takes place 30 years after the end of the play. Jimmy Valentine and Detective Ben Price find themselves on the same train and talk about the choices they made the day Agatha got trapped. 

This play was originally published in the December 2021/January 2022 issue.

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Close Reading, Critical Thinking, Skill Building

1. PREPARING TO READ (10 MINUTES)

2. READING AND DISCUSSING (45 minutes)

3. SKILL BUILDING AND WRITING (30 MINUTES)

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